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Whimsy & Woe's avatar

Whimsical and touching, a great little read. You did a whole lot of world building in a very small space, (Must be your experience as a craftsman)

The only problem with wonderful little stories like this is that I inevitably want to know more. I want to see Holfast and Oad get in trouble somehow and use brave children's dreams to get out, or any other twisting road the story takes you. You should consider serializing and expanding, your premise is truly worth the while.

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Parker McCoy's avatar

Haha. The boy caught onto them. I've always wondered if children see the true things happening but they're so far-fetched that adults can't or won't, believe them. Very cool story, Corey. Thank you for sharing.

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