Svanhvít

If you catch a swan by its feathers

A SWAN SOARED HIGH OVER THE GOLDEN ASPENS of a sprawling wood. She flew alone out of the low mountains that blackened the horizon and searched the yellow leaves for a body of blue to take rest. The swan was weary and desired something peaceful; the headwaters of a secret spring or a mountain lake too high for anything but goats to find.

Her dark eyes saw the lonely cottage first. It was nothing more than a house-shaped pile of mud and logs with a thatched roof, but clearly the handiwork of some man. The swan considered flying further. The works of men rarely brought good tidings. Then she saw the azure pool of purest mountain water north of the cottage. Her tired wings betrayed her misgivings. The swan circled once around the house and saw nothing to indicate recent occupancy. A stack of unsplit logs, fences in need of mending. Not even smoke billowed out of the chimney. Hopeful not to be disturbed, the swan flew to the pool. Long white feathers peeled off her wings and body as she dropped from the sky.

Inside the cottage, little Torsten knew nothing of a swan or its falling feathers. He stood on the cold hearth watching the rise and fall of his mother’s chest. She lay in bed for the third day in a row. Every blanket in the house rested on top of her, yet her skin felt cold. Torsten wished he could start a fire, but that knowledge had not been given to him before his father left to fight for the jarl and his mother fell ill. Even if he could stoke a fire, he was too small to lift the ax and split the kindling needed to keep the flame burning.

Torsten’s tummy grumbled. He had managed to feed himself while his mother was sick, but the supply of ready-to-eat foods was dwindling. How could he make bread or cook potatoes without fire? So much of the full cellar beneath the house was useless without burning timbers. He reached for the skin of water to satiate his belly, but the bag was empty. The bucket of water next to his mother’s bed needed to be filled, too.

So Torsten left the cottage and his ailing mother to go to the little pond.

As the swan descended, more of her feathers shed until, just before she reached the water’s edge, she did not resemble a swan at all. Pale, pink toes touched the rocks instead of webbed feet. Alabaster legs covered by a long chain mail shirt. Battle-worn breastplate beneath a cape of feathers. White translucent hair shod an eternally youthful face. In the shape of a woman, the Valkyrie named Eir, scanned the woods around the pond with the same black eyes with which she scanned the skies.

Squirrels scampered away; any bird that did not see her coming lay silently in its nest, hoping to remain unseen. For now, the pond was hers to use. She unclasped the feather cape from her armor and laid it against the salmon colored bark of a larch tree. Then she worked on removing the rest of her armor.

Torsten found the first white feathers halfway to the pond. He had never seen a white so clean and pure against the mottled forest floor. Its beauty was irresistible to such a young lad, and he picked it up. He admired its iridescence long enough to notice another feather further down the path, then another and another. He put the first feather in a fold in his tunic, but merely followed the rest. If the swan had flown somewhere other than the pond, Torsten might have wandered deep into the woods and forgotten all about his deathly ill mother. But fate desired that both the swan and the boy needed the water that day.

Eir had swum deep under the surface of the pond when Torsten emerged from the wood. Her fallen feathers led him straight to the cape, though it would have been impossible to miss among the greens, golds, and browns of the autumnal forest. Torsten took hold of the cape without knowing what destiny he brought upon himself by doing so. It was a fine thing. Finer than any garment Torsten had any hope of seeing in his lifetime. His desire for it was not in its beauty or magic, but for the warmth it was sure to bring his mother. Didn’t kings and queens sleep beneath goose down quilts? How much better would one of swan be?

Torsten noticed the pile of armor just as Eir emerged from the center of the pond. She appeared to sit on the water like a fowl. All of her naked waist was above the water where Torsten knew it to be deeper than a man is tall. Eir ran her fingers over the rippled surface, not noticing her quiet observer. Steam whirled off her warm body as though her skin were hot iron. She smiled. Torsten gripped the feather cape like a war shield and brought it over his eyes. His movement caught Eir’s attention. Two piercing black eyes found the cowering boy immediately. Her expression turned dark like storm clouds when she saw the captive cape.

“A child?” she asked violently. Torsten stepped back, with cape in hand. “Stop,” Eir demanded.

Torsten ran.

The cape flew behind him like a flag in the wind. It never caught on stick or bramble as his sure feet carried him up the path. But as fast as he was for his age, he was no match for the speed of a Valkyrie.

Eir ran like a doe through the trees. She took silent strides that stirred no dust and left little tracks. She overtook the boy at the place where he found the first feather, but when she reached for her cape, she found that some secret force repelled her hand. She screamed in frustration. Torsten turned to look. The naked woman hot behind his heels was a sight to behold. Beautiful. Fierce. Terrifying. Equal parts a goddess and warrior, even without clothes. The muscles that rippled in her torso were like those of his father, a woodsman who hewed trees into beams with only an ax and a wedge. Silvery scars, faded to wisps from age, lined her arms and legs that flushed red with immortal blood. Her face was that of an unwed maiden’s. Youthful and clean. Innocent except for the dark eyes that could frighten the hardest of fighters away from battle. Torsten looked into those angry eyes as he ran into a tree.

Rough bark bit into his flesh and tore his tunic. Air burst forth from his lungs like a bellows, and stars came into his vision, though the noonday sun was high. Torsten wept and wheezed on the ground, rolling over and over on the fine swan cape in pain and misery.

Eir came to a stop and attempted to retrieve her garment. Again, her hand was repelled with force and with pain. Deep pain like a burn that intensified if she pressed nearer to the cloak. Unlike a burn, the pain went away entirely when she withdrew.

“Do you know what you have done?” She asked Torsten. The boy groaned.

“I think I ran into that tree.”

“No, it was that one,” Eir pointed to the aspen trunk Torsten struck, “but that is not what matters now that you have stolen a valkyrie’s cloak.”

“A valkyrie?” Torsten attempted to roll over, but yelped in pain as he moved. Something was broken, his collar bone, perhaps, and he returned to his back. He did his best to put on a brave face for the pale nude standing over him, but the pain forced his legs to shake, and tears came out of his eyes.

“Mama,” he mumbled between gasps and sniffles.

Eir found compassion for the youngster then. Her role was not in judging the dead like her winged sisters, but in healing the worthy maimed. Other Valkyries shuttled the souls of the mighty to the halls of Valhalla. Eir restored those that death did not claim: the wounded victors and survivors of man’s battles. She had seen burly men face pain with less discipline than the youth before her.

Eir knew broken bones. She had healed many and seen many more twisted limbs that had mended on their own. This forest wasn’t a battlefield, and the injury wasn’t from a weapon. The boy would be fine. He didn’t need her.

“Ma.”

She thought of the pain that struck her when she neared the cloak. Her cloak. The cloak that Torsten stole. She needed to touch him to heal him, but he lay on the cloak that burned her when she neared it. Would the magic allow her close if her intentions were different?

“Mama,” Torsten moaned.

“Where does it hurt?” Eir knelt beside the boy. Dirt and leaves stuck to her bare knees, but the pain from the cloak did not touch her.

“Here,” Torsten said, touching his chest. A broken rib, maybe two. The boy was lucky a lung did not collapse.

Eir did not hesitate to push her hand beneath Torsten’s tunic. Flesh against flesh. His skin was warm from the heat of his injury; her skin was still cold from the pool. Torsten winced once from her touch, then the pain in his body disappeared. All of it. The pain in his ribs, the scuffs from the tree, the concussion in his skull. Torsten was made right by the hands of Eir.

She pulled back once her task was finished. The drain of power made the muscles in her wrist sore. The boy stood up from the cloak, leaving it unattended. Eir thought of taking it back for the briefest of moments, and then the burn returned as though she had just leaned against a piping hot cauldron.

Her rapid retreat went unnoticed by Torsten, who marveled at his lack of agony.

“I’m better,” he said.

“For now,” Eir said. Mortals were too easily broken for her to be impressed by her own power.

“How did you—” Torsten asked.

“I have many things to explain to you, child, and my power is not one of them.”

“Why are you naked?”

Eir looked down at herself. Unlike mortals, she felt no shame from her nudity.

“You stole my cloak,” she said.

“This?” Torsten asked, holding up the feather cape. Dirt and leaves fell off of it like water running down waxed cloth.

“Yes, that is mine.”

“Oh. It’s pretty.”

“It was made by the All Father. A gift. One given to each of his Valkyries.”

“What’s a Valkyrie?”

“Of all the mortals to be cleaved to—” Eir pinched the bridge of her nose and inhaled deeply. “Valkyries are the warriors of the gods. Odin’s shield maidens. I’m a valkyrie, and you have stolen my cloak, which also makes me your wife. Have your mother and father not taught you these things?”

“Father is gone,” Torsten answered. “He is fighting for the jarl. And Mama is—” Remembrance of his mother’s health returned, and Torsten turned and ran home.

Eir sighed and decided not to chase after the boy. Instead, she walked back to the pond. Her armor looked dull without the splendor of her cloak. It was made of magnificent mail, finer than any human smith could forge, but absent her Valkyrie’s mantle, there was nothing to differentiate her from any other shield maiden of the world. She didn’t want to put on the armor, but knew it would be easier to wear than to carry.

“Are you truly my wife?” Torsten asked. He reappeared behind Eir just as she fastened the last buckle on her breast plate. She wasn’t startled by the boy, though she was surprised he had returned. Her cloak was notably absent, and the boy looked even smaller than she remembered. Perhaps not even eight winters old.

“Regrettably, I am yours.” Eir said.

“Can you help me then? I heard Dad say a wife’s supposed to help their husband.”

“Is that what he tells your mother?” Eir imagined the conversation between the boy’s parents and shuddered at their domestic life.

“I heard him say it once.”

“A wife can help her husband with some things.”

“Can you help me then? Please.”

Eir looked at the child. He looked hurt, though she had just made him whole a few minutes ago. She felt a matron’s pity for the boy. Where was his mother? She thought.

“Tell me how I may help you,” Eir forced herself to say.

“Follow me,” Torsten requested, then turned again to go up the path. Eir obliged.

Torsten did not run through the woods, but his pace was urgent. He took two steps to every one of the Valkyrie’s strides.

They reached the house. The same house Eir saw from the sky. Its disrepair was worse than what she observed. Perhaps, she thought, the boy’s father was right to reprimand his bride. Winter would be over the land soon. The little bit of cut wood stacked around the cabin was green and unsplit. Gaps needed to be chinked in the shelter walls. The thatched roof surely leaked. The jarl’s war might claim the father’s life, but his absence would certainly kill his wife and son.

The boy naively rushed past all of Eir’s concerns and went through the door. Eir hesitated to follow. The smell of something putrid stayed her feet. Something sick or dead was inside the house.

“Come in, please help me,” Torsten called. Eir entered and found the source of the smell.

A waif of a woman lay in the center of the house under a pile of pelts and linens. Her cracked eyes stared into oblivion. The fine swan-feather cloak rested on top of the stack of bedclothes. Eir’s desire to take it out of the miserable house sent a strong throb of pain through her. She had to wrestle her emotions down to stay inside.

“Do you know how to start a fire?” Torsten asked. He offered flint and iron. “I can’t keep her warm.”

Eir’s black eyes softened. She looked at the flint, then at the boy’s mother, who breathed beneath the blankets, but only just. A fire would not save her.

The room bore signs of the boy’s care. Damp rags hung on pegs; a pile of soiled clothes in a distant corner; an untouched plate of food near the bed. She formed a new opinion of the boy and began to feel unworthy to be his wife.

“Take off the blankets,” she instructed.

“But she’s—”

“Sick. Yes, do as I say if you want to save her.”

Torsten followed orders. He hung the cloak up on a peg, but he pushed the other coverings onto the floor beside the bed. He did all this without his mother moving an inch. Her eyes remained open, but shut to the world.

By the emaciated form beneath the blankets, Eir could tell that the boy’s mother had been sick for far longer than her child could have known. She was nothing but bones wrapped in sallow skin. How long had the woman suffered? Six months? A year?

Eir looked at Torsten. He was a picture of health if not a little plump in the middle. His mother must have fought a private war to keep him well.

“I have to touch her,” Eir said. She knelt beside the bed and put a hand on the woman’s chest. The disease bombarded her senses. She felt the imbalanced humors and each failing system as though they were runes etched in stone. The woman had an hour to live, if not minutes. To pull back a life so close to death would push Eir’s skills to the limits, and it was an impossible task without the power of—

“My cloak,” Eir said. “I need my cloak to be able to save her.” Torsten lifted the feather cape off the hook as soon as Eir’s words were out of her mouth and offered it. The feathers came near enough to brush her skin, and Eir felt no pain.

“If you freely return that which you’ve taken, I will no longer be your wife,” Eir said. Torsten pulled the cape back.

“Will you still help me?” He asked. Eir smiled

“I cannot help you if I am your bride. But as a Valkyrie, I swear I will.”

With her reassurance, Torsten returned the cape to its owner. It shimmered with even more brilliance once Eir took hold of it. She draped it over her shoulders, and the cape became a pair of wings. Bright light, like the glinting reflection of the sun, filled the dingy cabin. Torsten stepped back in fear of the Valkyrie’s full form.

When Eir touched Torsten’s mother this time, the sick woman’s body convulsed. Her eyes and mouth opened, and a thick substance like coal smoke flew from every orifice of her head. The dazzling light of Eir’s wings flickered as she fought out the pestilence, until they dimmed entirely. The Valkyrie drew away her hand at the darkest moment. She stepped back, spent from her ordeal, and gasped for air. Torsten’s mother inhaled sharply, too. The skin flushed on her face and neck. Pink and red replaced yellow. Her skin, which had previously sagged, drew tight with health and vitality.

“Am I alive?” She asked.

Torsten leaped onto bed to give his mother a hug. He buried his face into her chest and cried, “You’re alive, Ma. You’re alive.”

EIR STUMBLED OUT OF THE HOUSE like a drunkard leaving a tavern. Mother and son embraced inside while she struggled to stand. She forced herself to walk out of the yard and down the path towards the pond. As she went through the woods, she began to change. The loops of her mail shirt transformed into feathers of the cleanest white. Her stumbling gait began to shuffle, then waddle. When she reached the banks, Eir no longer resembled a woman, but a swan. Her wings flapped as the bird stepped into the water. She took one, two more steps, then her wings flapped violently. As a swan, Eir ran across the surface of the pond until she took flight. She rose high into the sky and disappeared behind great white clouds.

TORSTEN HELD HIS MOTHER LONG AFTER THE SWAN vanished into the sky. For once, she felt warm.

“I love you,” his mother said.

“I love you, too.”

“What’s this?” Something in Torsten’s tunic had poked his mother in the chest. He opened the fold and revealed a single, perfect white feather.

“It’s a gift,” he said, holding the feather in his hand. “Ma, can you tell me about the Valkyrie?”

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